Special place scene description

This is my special place description. I hope you enjoy.

Purpose: to inform

WALT describe with clear and interesting details

Success Criteria

• Quick plan to prepare for the writing task (brainstorm with words or ideas)
• Interesting beginning and ending
• Using the senses (see, touch, hear, smell)
• Includes strong descriptive words (adjectives)
• Uses the present tense

Examples: Bamboo Forest / Scene Description by Dylan / Scene Description by Sophia

Writing Task: Describing a special place in Hawke’s Bay

Waimarama beach.

Waimarama beach.

As I feel the extraordinary  breeze  upon my legs swishing passed me. I see the amazing view  just in front of my eyes. The sand is blowing like a thunder storm. The waves are swishing back and forth. The blue water it just beautiful sparkling in my eyes. The summer  light is mind blowing like a balloon just popped. As the blue sky blends in with the blue water reflecting  onto my eyes.

As I glare at the mountains I barely see the trees.  It’s an awesome feeling  and peacefull place too!. The sure is warm but the water is  cold. Waimarama beach is a surrounding place where awesome waves and outstanding weather. Swimming and splashing is aloud but going out further is not allowed. It starts off shallow but gets deeper and deeper.

As waves splash it give me an enormous fright. This is a calming beach where you can enjoy yourself whenever you want. The sky is blue just blue it’s like it’s not even their! This is the most fantastic sight I’ve ever  been to before.  This is a success for the beach. This is hard to believe that this is not a picture. This is a mind blowing sight.

(if your wondering what the island is called. It's called (mo to or kura)

My blog camp memories.

This is my camp memories I hope you enjoy it. I had loads of fun getting this work together. I hope you enjoy watching this slide show. Please click play to see more.   (slide show).

My waka art.

So lately I have been wanting to share my waka art that I have been working on. So I started off with a plan a very simple plan now this art is very fun. Now this waka art inspires me by lots of people and lots of subjects. So my waka art is very special to me because I spent lots of time making this to my PB. I also got a lot of help from my friends at school. My waka art Represents mainly my whanau and friends and the things I like to do. 

P.E blog post.

Welcome back to term 4. In term 4 we are going to start learning steps  for athletics that is coming up soon and the teachers want us to do a good job.

We did lots of jumping in our session and we also  made a good start in the first session. 

At the second session we did throwing and in a special position. I like throwing because it help's you get stronger in a learning way. 
In throwing you learn lots and lots and we also got to see who can get the furthest. 

The third one we learned was running which I liked because I think I learnt so much. I might use some idea's for my cross-country running.


So I like all of them and hope you liked my blog post of P.E!
Here is a pic of the P.E equitment.

Art blog post / sketching.

Hey guys,
Have you ever seen sketching like this before? Well you're about to see the awesome sketching that I have made.
 I am going to talk you guys through step by step.  I like sketching.

Steps for sketching.

You need:

1. A3 peice of paper.

2. sketching pencil

3. rubber

4. pencil.

Some tips
You have to shade on the side of your pencil not on the tip.
Also you shade best with a shading pen.
Always look at what you are drawing.

So that is all you need to make a great piece of art!.

Here is a picture of my art/ sketching.

Literacy blog post.

Hey guys and today I am going to share my literacy that I have been working on. I like my literacy because I learn lots and I am always enjoying everything. So far I have been getting good learning from my literacy teacher. I like learning lots because I get smarter. I can also help other people which is called collaboration, when we work together. Literacy helps our learning and we are also getting ready for some big tests coming up.

Here is a pic of my literacy that I have been doing. It is a cloze activity, which uses lots of reading skills.

My maths

Ki ora and welcome back to my blog. For my first post in term 4, I am going to be showing you the maths basic facts that I have been learning since we started back at school. So I have been having lots of fun  going over my 5 timetables. So I am going to show you my 5 timetables.

5x1=5

5x2=10

5x3=15

5x4=20

5x5=25

5x6=30

5x7=35

5x8=40

5x9=45

5x10=50

5x11=55

5x12=60.

If you know that you are going to be a Stage 5 Star.