Special place scene description

This is my special place description. I hope you enjoy.

Purpose: to inform

WALT describe with clear and interesting details

Success Criteria

• Quick plan to prepare for the writing task (brainstorm with words or ideas)
• Interesting beginning and ending
• Using the senses (see, touch, hear, smell)
• Includes strong descriptive words (adjectives)
• Uses the present tense

Examples: Bamboo Forest / Scene Description by Dylan / Scene Description by Sophia

Writing Task: Describing a special place in Hawke’s Bay

Waimarama beach.

Waimarama beach.

As I feel the extraordinary  breeze  upon my legs swishing passed me. I see the amazing view  just in front of my eyes. The sand is blowing like a thunder storm. The waves are swishing back and forth. The blue water it just beautiful sparkling in my eyes. The summer  light is mind blowing like a balloon just popped. As the blue sky blends in with the blue water reflecting  onto my eyes.

As I glare at the mountains I barely see the trees.  It’s an awesome feeling  and peacefull place too!. The sure is warm but the water is  cold. Waimarama beach is a surrounding place where awesome waves and outstanding weather. Swimming and splashing is aloud but going out further is not allowed. It starts off shallow but gets deeper and deeper.

As waves splash it give me an enormous fright. This is a calming beach where you can enjoy yourself whenever you want. The sky is blue just blue it’s like it’s not even their! This is the most fantastic sight I’ve ever  been to before.  This is a success for the beach. This is hard to believe that this is not a picture. This is a mind blowing sight.

(if your wondering what the island is called. It's called (mo to or kura)